The Invisible World
Have you seen anything that is invisible to others? If not, follow along and you will see the real nightmares. You may not believe it but you always have spirits around. Have you wondered why when it's quiet you can hear sounds? All the time there are spirits around, but when it's not quiet you can’t hear their footsteps or when they move things. That's why you think there are no spirits. But do you know why sometimes you feel frightened when you are alone? Because the ghosts there, playing with your mind. It was 1872. Sally and David lived in a cabin with a dirty floor; the window was fixed with plastic instead of glass and it had an old wobbly door always slamming when it was windy. The two friends didn’t believe that there were spirits around until they actually saw them. These two didn’t have parents or a home to live in. Click for the rest of the story.
42 comments:
good job
you are the best :)
i like your story Reema i like it =)
thats a pretty cool story
You are the best
Good Jop
Reema, your vocabulary is astounding!
Reema Nicee Story It Was Good.:)
good history
i like your story Reema i like it =)
well writen!! its a good story!!!
good history
Its a cool story im going to buy it.
i like your story reema the suspence was great.
It's a good story I like it.You should do another one.
this is a pretty nice story reema.
Nice story
Your story is a every grate scary story.
well writen!! its a good story!!!
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i want candy if u win and cupcake
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the best scary story ever:)
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Great Job sister!!! Your story is amazing! It made me believe in the invisible spirits.
I'm glad they get the mansion!
Wow! the scariest story I 've ever read. Great job Reema!!!
I love your story Reema. It is the best story in the history of Halloween.
it is scary enough to let you wonder whether there is ghost or they are just something that passed to each other a long generations. but i think the name of ghosts came from funny person who was Genius. but many other people believed him same as Dracula story.
I agree with your sisters.
Very Good Reemaa, iLike It[:
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Reema Your story has exceptional details that make the reader feel a part of the story and interested to read more to see what happens! Well written! I'm glad there is a happy ending.
Great job, Reema! I really enjoyed reading your story.
Yay, Reema, that was awesome! Very clever!
When I read Reema's story I felt kind of scared but I was curious what was going to happen at the end of the story and I was really glad to have read Reema's story.
Reema, This was a really creepy story. I am really impressed by your vocabulary usage and your story development. Way to Go!!!!
It's not very often that I read such a creepy story with such a happy, surprise ending. Great job!
I don't think I could come up with something that good, because at first it was very scary, but the story was getting interesting and I just had to know what was going to happen in the story, I think your story is the best Reema!
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