Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Dare to Scare by Reema A.




The Invisible World


Have you seen anything that is invisible to others? If not, follow along and you will see the real nightmares. You may not believe it but you always have spirits around. Have you wondered why when it's quiet you can hear sounds? All the time there are spirits around, but when it's not quiet you can’t hear their footsteps or when they move things. That's why you think there are no spirits. But do you know why sometimes you feel frightened when you are alone? Because the ghosts there, playing with your mind. It was 1872. Sally and David lived in a cabin with a dirty floor; the window was fixed with plastic instead of glass and it had an old wobbly door always slamming when it was windy. The two friends didn’t believe that there were spirits around until they actually saw them. These two didn’t have parents or a home to live in. Click for the rest of the story.

42 comments:

♥TE AMO MUCHO 23♥ said...

good job
you are the best :)

Anonymous said...

i like your story Reema i like it =)

Snowflake said...

thats a pretty cool story

♥TE AMO MUCHO 23♥ said...

You are the best
Good Jop

Dr. Sanders said...

Reema, your vocabulary is astounding!

Lelii Perez said...

Reema Nicee Story It Was Good.:)

angel said...

good history

mendez1 said...

i like your story Reema i like it =)

Anonymous said...

well writen!! its a good story!!!

garcia said...

good history

CESAR6000 said...

Its a cool story im going to buy it.

Anonymous said...

i like your story reema the suspence was great.

justin bieber said...

It's a good story I like it.You should do another one.

flores said...

this is a pretty nice story reema.

cynthia reyes said...

Nice story

Majd Alwan said...

Your story is a every grate scary story.

Anonymous said...

well writen!! its a good story!!!

Anonymous said...

well writen, its a good story

monica said...

its a ggreat story hoooooooo
halloween!!!!!!!!!!!!
i want candy if u win and cupcake

Cynthia Silva said...

nice story!!

monica said...

its great story

cynthia said...

its great story

milan thakkar said...

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cynthia said...

umm treats hahah!!!

fa said...

the best scary story ever:)

Farhad said...

the best story ever:)

Anonymous said...

the best story ever :)

Shahnaz Alhamy said...

Great Job sister!!! Your story is amazing! It made me believe in the invisible spirits.

Cindi said...

I'm glad they get the mansion!

Shahla A. said...

Wow! the scariest story I 've ever read. Great job Reema!!!

sherevan said...

I love your story Reema. It is the best story in the history of Halloween.

Alex said...

it is scary enough to let you wonder whether there is ghost or they are just something that passed to each other a long generations. but i think the name of ghosts came from funny person who was Genius. but many other people believed him same as Dracula story.

Jen said...

I agree with your sisters.

Arleth;(CHikiZ] said...

Very Good Reemaa, iLike It[:

Anonymous said...

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Mrs. Stefancic said...

Reema Your story has exceptional details that make the reader feel a part of the story and interested to read more to see what happens! Well written! I'm glad there is a happy ending.

mmccarter said...

Great job, Reema! I really enjoyed reading your story.

Anonymous said...

Yay, Reema, that was awesome! Very clever!

Shahristan said...

When I read Reema's story I felt kind of scared but I was curious what was going to happen at the end of the story and I was really glad to have read Reema's story.

Tricia said...

Reema, This was a really creepy story. I am really impressed by your vocabulary usage and your story development. Way to Go!!!!

Daryl said...

It's not very often that I read such a creepy story with such a happy, surprise ending. Great job!

Shahristan said...

I don't think I could come up with something that good, because at first it was very scary, but the story was getting interesting and I just had to know what was going to happen in the story, I think your story is the best Reema!