Monday, October 22, 2012

Dare to Scare by Reema A.


The Girl Who Visited Linda at Home
It is hard when you think you are alone but you are not really alone. It is even harder when you feel something alive around you and you don’t see it. Why, sometimes, are there invisible things around you?
            James and Anna were waiting for this day anxiously, which is prom. They were so excited about the prom that they got ready for it and bought formal clothes one month before the prom. At the prom day at about twelve o’clock, Anna went to the Beauty Center to do her makeup. By the time she was done with her makeup, James was ready as well. He was wearing a black suit; he was so handsome especially the black suit matched with his white face, hazel eyes and blonde hair. Anna wore a long one shoulder violet dress, with sparkly straps on the shoulder. her hair was wavy. They were the most beautiful couple. When James saw Anna, he was amazed at how beautiful she looked. Then they held each other’s hands and started walking toward the car.  When they were crossing the traffic they looked at each other and didn’t pay attention to where they were going.  Anna was so beautiful James could not pay attention to his driving that they ran the red light. From the opposite side came a truck that crushed their car. Both of them went unconscious, they both were covered with blood. The glass of the car windows slashed their faces and the ambulance took them to the hospital immediately. Unfortunately Anna died on the way to the hospital, but James stayed unconscious for about one week.  Read More

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

because it was so good I don't even know what to say. I didn't like it but i loved it.

shahristan said...

It was so astonishing i can't find the words to describe it. i didn't like it but i loved it.

Anonymous said...

It was very good, especially at the end when the girl found out it was somebody that died from school.

Farhad Alhamy said...

It was very good, especially at the end when the girl found out it was somebody that died from school.

Sherevan said...

I had goosebumps on my arms when I read the part where she was in the bathroom. Nice story!

S.A. said...

Great Job! My favorite part was how excited the couple got about going to prom. The ending was really sad! Overall, I loved the story ♥

Shahla A. said...

Wonderful story, so scary that I felt I was part of the story. I love your story, perfect for Halloween night.

Mrs. McCarter said...

Wow! This is an amazing story, Reema....very scary! I love your detail and your descriptions....I could really picture in my mind how your characters looked and I could experience what they were feeling. Great job!

Anonymous said...

Loved the realistic details. Very cool ending! ~Dr.S