Monday, October 31, 2011

Dare to Scare by Roxy

The Eye



1907: A young woman, 17 years old, born in Guadalajara, Jalisco. Her name was “No Name.” She was a normal girl but she was blind, and she had a big, huge secret: Despite her blindness, she was able to see ghosts. One day in the town she was born in, a lot of her neighbors started asking themselves, “Why is she always inside her house, alone, with no one?” No Name was always inside for one reason that nobody knew: she was scared of being outside and seeing ghosts outside every moment ~in the world, on the street ...everywhere. One day, July 1st, it was a really pretty day with beautiful sunlight, a lot of birds and nice weather. She wasn’t able to see it, but she could feel the air and hear the birds. She decided to go out. After she was about to go outside there was a little kid playing by himself; he threw a ball into No Name’s front yard, he stepped onto the grass and he disappeared. For the rest of the story

23 comments:

Milan said...

its really greatttttt story!!!!!

Milan thakkar said...

its lovely

Snowflake said...

nice story gurl

garcia said...

I like your History

freddy said...

i love your story roxy nice job!

Riddhi said...

its a great story i love it and the names are funny.

Anonymous said...

Niice Storyy Roxyy:)
-*Lovee It)

Betsy said...

Great!

mendez said...

I like ur story!!=)

Anonymous said...

great story should do another story.

roxxxxy said...

nice job roxxxxy

cynthia said...

Nice Story.

CESAR6000 said...

ITS CHIDO!!!!!!

miguel said...

thats cool made me one pliz

Elisa said...

it's a very good story!! great job!!

Reema said...

That's a good name to wonder if she is a ghost.

Anonymous said...

the story it's good

majd alwan said...

it's a good story it is every arisinal.

Elisa said...

well writen!! its a good story!!!

Mrs. Stefancic said...

Pretty Scary Roxy!

mmccarter said...

I really enjoed reading your story, Roxy. Great job!

Mrs. McCarter

OMgg said...

Veryy Goooooddd!!!!!!!!

Shahnaz said...

Your dream was spooky! Great Job!!!!!