Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Dare to Scare by Jacob U.


Foolish Little Johnny

Johnny was a lot like a student you may know; a jokester, a comedian, but somehow he maintained a 4.0 GPA throughout his entire first year in high school as a freshman. Yeah, Johnny had the life.
Johnny (born Jonathan, nicknamed Johnny at an early age) had the face that every girl wanted to be around, with thick blonde hair that just barely extended to his bushy, blonde eyebrows. Though school ended two days ago, he still remained in contact with all the girls that were from his school, East View High.
The thing that made East View a perfect fit for Johnny is that they had a year-round hockey program. Better yet, the summer proportion of this program began today, June 3rd. You may be wondering, where was Johnny? Johnny was on his way to the rink to begin his daily training.
He was one of the first to arrive, as always. Quickly, he raised a question with his eyebrow to his first-line defensemen, Derek Smith, "Where’s Coach B?"
Derek grinned to himself as he answered Johnny’s question, "Didn’t you hear? Coach B was fired by the school. Budget cuts."
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25 comments:

fred gosbeth said...

well writen and pretty scary

Anonymous said...

Good story with a scary plot.

marc blackman said...

awesome

Jay said...

Love the hockey references!

brian hauber said...

scary

Anonymous said...

could be better

Anonymous said...

Good story, ended soon..

mamie gulbro said...

this story ended to fastbut was fantabulus

Jonathan said...

Don't really like reading stuff, and I do not like horror stories, but this was pretty fun to read. Very entertaining. Happy Halloween! Good luck!

Isaias said...

whole thing was amazing! nice story! make more bud!and longer ones too!(:

Anonymous said...

Hockey references were cool and very well written!

Mikan said...

Not the best story ever, but entertaining.

StoryReader3000 said...

Great story! Will share with friends

John said...

John says - Why is this story so short?

osiel espino said...

good story

Alexander Kubinski said...

its was a great story urbs

thomas temes said...

super freaky

trevor tiani said...

cool hockey refrences and it was a scary piece of work my man

joe said...

funny

Bud said...

Make longer!

TrickorTreat said...

Happy Halloween! Great story@!

story reader3001 said...

good one man

Madeline said...

nice job! very proud

Madeline said...

very good! loved it!

mannup said...

Great story, but one thing... There aren;t hockey regerences?