Friday, October 21, 2011

Dare to Scare by Donna K.




"I don't think she cares" I whispered.
"I don't think she cares about YOU"
I glanced up and then immediately back down. I didn't want to hear it, but the voice didn't stop.
"She never cared about a thing you did. You weren't anywhere near perfect, which made you a complete disappointment in her eyes. Pathetic, worthless, a waste of time and space. She was sick of having to deal with you, and really, she hated your guts from your first flaw on."
"I don't believe in perfect. I can't be what I don't believe in…" I whispered again.
"Yeah, and maybe that was your first mistake."
I closed my eyes. I really wanted that voice to shut up. I didn't need to hear it anymore… It's not like I didn't already think she thought that. I knew she thought that way. I knew she hated me—every day.
"she's more flawed than I am…" I mumbled, folding my arms.
"Yeah. She is. She's horrible, in every way… shape and form. She's even got the most annoying voice on the face of the planet. What do you do with flaws, honey?"
"Me? I get rid of them. I need to be close to perfect in order to live to the next day…"
"So, what do you do with flaws?"
"I get rid of them."
"And, what is she?"
"… one, big, flaw"
"So, what are we going to do with her?"
"We're going to get rid of her!" I smiled a bit, but then became confused, "But, how?"
"How do you want to, dear?"
I smiled. These words finally made me feel good, a sense of power rushed through me as I stood up. Its time to get rid of the flaws! It's time to make this… perfect!

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3 comments:

Diana Beltran said...

*thumbs up* :D XD its so well written!

Diana Beltran said...

*thumbs up* :D XD its so well written!

Snowflake said...

Love it i dive it a 1000 even a higher number i love that story